Friday, March 11, 2011

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There is peace in the house, a huge, bright thing.
There are sleeping people, brave memories,
drawn to the hope of hopes, the fireside of calm.
You can remember when family was intact.
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Lamont Palmer (Lamont Palmer)
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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

Perfectly written poem lamot

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Home is where the heart lives....

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Home is where the heart lives....

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Patricia Grantham 09 July 2013

Enjoyed this write. A calming and soothing poem about the simple country life. Very good details.

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Adeline Foster 04 August 2012

I was struck by the line - We are nothing if not an army; soft, strategic: here, - When one gets to that “here” it gives one that breathless “wow” Very well done. Read mine – Wide Open Spaces – Adeline

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