Davids Sling 519 Comments

david it has potential with a little work it would suit the church scene perhaps you could play it to some people who listen to that kind of music and ask them for there response i think you need to add a few more lines and maybe a chorus as a poem just a spellcheck and it is fine as it is Warm regards allan i have been away in a little place called ballina

ok, thats thats, this is the third time working with this poem/song if any one cares, theres chords that can go with it.........