* David Comments

I really love this poem and love the name too.

A, this is superb. You have a fine way with words. This had me dreaming.

This takes me back to warm and cherished moments of my youth.Thankyou for sharing such fine words.Love Duncan

Damselfly, you are a beautiful poet and you make me think of the greatest of all poets, David! ! !

I thought this might have been about me......I think it is a very nice poem..lots of twist's...nice david

A lot of beautiful sensory images, Adrienne, and I really felt the release, the freeing, in the last few lines! One of the best closures I've ever read, I think.

This was writen with such beautiful imagery! I am looking forward to reading more of your work! Rene'

This is what a poem should be...unusual, rich imagery, little pieces of a poet's soul, and an ending where the reader says with a voice choked in emotion, 'Oh YES! ' Raynette

You write most eloquently. I am so glad, that i found this and read it. I most certainly plan on reading many more. Warmly, Theodora Onken

ok, you're the first poet I've come across on this site that's really left me dumbfounded. Your work has a timeless air to it...compelling and beautiful, you will be hearing from me again. Always, Amberlee

Lush and full. Nice work!