David + Peter = Me Comments

enjoy this too... he is a good Father

Jacqui... Amazing poem.... Love can never be destroyed.. its immortal... Amazing write.. Loved it :)

i love this one... a true prayer!

I read this poem as a spiritual one wrapped with prayer, love and asking for forgiveness as you said that you were a lost daughter ((No death, no life, no angels, no power, No present, no future, no past No height, no depth, no alien, no tower Nothing that forever last, There's nothing anything can do- to keep me away from me...))) wow, it's powerful words and lines.. A revealing statement of your strong love to your Father! ! ! Top marks! ! ! !

I read this poem as a spiritual one wrapped with prayer, love and asking for forgiveness as you said that you were a lost daughter ((No death, no life, no angels, no power, No present, no future, no past No height, no depth, no alien, no tower Nothing that forever last, There's nothing anything can do- to keep me away from me...))) wow, it's powerful words and lines.. A revealing statement of your stong love to your Father! ! ! Top marks! ! ! !

nice poem the listing was powerful. n poem was overall amazing

Yikes! People say gun is powerful but I feel you pen is most powerful. Is you mind a powerhouse? Is your love a grand house? I am speechless when I read this powerful message to your lover. I don't know about his heart but my heart is melting like candle to see you beseeching and imploring for love. That's why I think Keats died for Fanny Brownie. 'No death, no life, no angels, no power, no present, no future, no past, no height, no depth, no alien, no tower -' Let give garland of flowers for writing this poems................

A really beautiful poem. Really really liked it. Really good write.