Friday, September 4, 2009

@ David And She Comments

Rating: 5.0

She rubbed the bows rick on earth
From between the crevices of sandy bricks
Where the purple flowers would stick in deep
Black crow would tell her the time not a minute
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Sandra Fowler 10 September 2009

Rich vocabulary. Unique use of color and metaphor. All contribute to the timeless mood of this compelling write.10, of course. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Joseph Poewhit 04 September 2009

Brings age perspectives into focus

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Ejaz Khan 04 September 2009

Excellent, very descriptive, very mysterious and enchanting!

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Anjali Sinha 04 September 2009

wow her enzymes her body odour her pheromones a glossary of rich text -10 anjali

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