David And Goliath Comments

Tan you have written a great poem here on display. A beautifully presented and imagined Christian poem. Six stanza's where no word is wasted a gem from beginning to its worthy conclusion. Thank you good Tan for writing and sharing your stand alone poem. 10+ and added to my religious treasure chest. Thanks again and take care.

Like the arrows hidden in God's quiver, (They were stones baptized in the river.) I give you 10 points based on the content and giving God credit for the success.