David And Goliath Comments

David and Goliath mmmm..... you v composed this well indeed... i liked your earlier poems too.. specially narrative ones.... you are very professional when it comes to writing.. with loves shan

An amazing interpretation of an old tale. Beautifully done and very readable. I love it, thanks! : -)

I like this one. I'm always a sucker for a good rhyming pattern. I see lots of banter on the forum about rhyme - v - prose. It aint a competition. This is an old tale beautifully reconstructed in modern language. Very enjoyable read Best Steve

I loved it almost as great as being told by the Bible itself.

truly amazing..magnificent words and the meanings are truly biblical!

Nice concept with a good flow, vivid and captivating 10++

The conductor/music imagery considerably enhances this poetic telling and helps create a crescendo effect to match the climax... very devious..

we want more Davids in this terror Goliath ruling world...sweet recitation...i liked your story telling and poem presentation style, John...thanks...10

A beautifully written modern tribute to an old bible story. Very eloquently expressed with rhyme, wit and obvious talent. Thank you for sharing :)