Thursday, August 10, 2006

Davetheleg Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never went to school,
I havn't read many books.
I don't try to be cool,
get lots of funny looks.
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David Darbyshire
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Karen Summers 27 November 2006

Dave, After I read your poem 'davetheleg', I wrote this, 'Just for you today' You made me smile and giggle... Not done, in Quite a while. you made some things even 'jiggle'.. ;) And for that today, I thank you Dave....smile :) Karen Summers

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Scarlett Treat 22 August 2006

Even when 'your grammar ain't so good', you still make me smile.

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Dee Daffodil 17 August 2006

Dave...We all (well, ok, most of us) , appreciate your poems and your sense of humour! I am so glad I read this one...yet again...I thought it was about something different...: -) Hugs, Dee

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Diane Violet 17 August 2006

You always raise a smile and sometimes a downright good ole belly laugh. Thanks David.

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***** ********* 17 August 2006

David, you are a very modest sweet man and poet. All that other stuff, is a proof readers job for the more sensitive of us poetic souls who don't do spelling and punctuation too well. Someone has to give them a job! and it's the art that comes through, that is the important thing to remember. Not everyone can bring a smile, and no one quite like you. Keep up the grand work, Smiling at you, your cornland friend, Tai

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Duncan Wyllie 14 August 2006

This one certainly has and without a doubt, smiling right back at you Dave hope you have a great day Love duncan X

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Melvina Germain 11 August 2006

I have to give you a 10 here Dave, I really loved it. It was carefree and honest. I'm glad I read it.---Melvina

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Kristin Davis 11 August 2006

Hey Dave, it's been a while... but just so it's known... even if I'm not able to post a comment via terms of life, I definitely enjoy each and every piece you supply on here. Hope to see many more to come! Hugs Dave. Love and Honor, Kris!

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Tailor Bell 11 August 2006

i learn all my lessons, the hard way. besides, you know what they say about success...a little luck and lotsa work. enjoyed this. -T. Bell

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Nalini Hebbar 10 August 2006

dave...you are the best! ! ! ...and i start smiling even before i start reading! ! ! ...laugh out loud after i read...but you have no right to be sad...forbidden territory for you, OK? ...you are the poet my husband loves on PH...love...nalini

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Patricia Gale 10 August 2006

Yes you always bring a smile and a giggle or two!

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Esther Leclerc 10 August 2006

Yes, indeed, your joie de vivre is contagious, Dave! Write on in happiness. Esther : ]

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Francesca Johnson 10 August 2006

Yes, you always raise a smile, Dave. But....why the strange title? I've heard of Jake the Peg but not your version. Love, Fran xx

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