Friday, April 20, 2018

Daunting Task Comments

Rating: 5.0

The light from a pinhole
When the room is dark
enough to overcome the daunting task
Step forward and follow the ray
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Rini Shibu
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Unnikrishnan E S 21 April 2018

Hi Rini Wonderful! Just follow the ray and you have a sunny day! Very positive outlook. Your positivity is contagious. Thank you.

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Rini Shibu 21 April 2018

Thanks for visiting and posting your feedback

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 April 2018

So lovely, so precise, so briefly you said a ton, Rini! Loved your approach. 10+++++++++++

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks Subhas, glad that you like it

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Lamar Cole 20 April 2018

Great poem with great advice to follow.

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks Lamar for your compliments

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Robert Murray Smith 20 April 2018

Rini, a poem of precision.

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks, glad to read your comment

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2018

Dear friend Rini, such an inspiring poem worthy to mark with a 10+++++

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks Bernard, glad that you visiting

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