Wednesday, April 15, 2015

Daughter's: S Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

what is the best voice ever be
i dance and dance finally listening to you
what is the best game ever be
i jump and jump finally finding you
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Fatima Obaid
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 May 2015

Wow a lovely unique poem leaping in the mommys lap! U wrote it in such a nice hearty way and style. U apreciate mother well. Thumbs up!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 15 April 2015

Wonderful thoughts, beautifully framed in to a resounding rhythm to yield a rose bud to be offered to a loving mom. Enjoyed! Thank you for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 15 April 2015

Beautiful, Fatima. I have four daughters and the love I have for them is without compare. Thank you for sharing your poem Peace

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