Thursday, July 25, 2013

Daughter's Back Comments

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Daughter's gone, daughter's gone,
Still my memories linger on;
All those moments through the years
Fraught with anguish, doubts and fears.
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Joseph Anderson
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Divya Gupta 19 August 2013

its a very nice poem...as i love my paa a lot... i could feel your feelings...loved it a lot! !

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Walterrean Salley 06 August 2013

Brought on a soft smile and a light chuckle. Oh, I enjoyed this sooo much. Congrats to you, and bravo to daughter.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 31 July 2013

she is back, she is back and with that life is better and happier she is never gone after all

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Danny Draper 27 July 2013

Mine are leaving as they age, but as with yours hopefully never too far away.

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Ramesh Rai 27 July 2013

children are always loving to parent. they may be doing several mischief yet always loving. parent always like to see them happy. so your happiness is natural.though i dont have any daughter but i think daughters are more loving to father. regards

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Heather Wilkins 27 July 2013

it is always good when our daughters return nice

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Smoky Hoss 26 July 2013

As a father of two daughter I surely appreciate this fine poetic work.

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David Wood 26 July 2013

I like it Jo. Sometimes we can't wait for them to go, but then we are happy when they return.

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Valsa George 26 July 2013

There is all the reason for you to rejoice! Your daughter who once fooled you arousing unnecessary anxieties in you has come back once more fooling you by proving that your onetime fears were out of place! Yes, seventeen is a turbulent age for most of the youngsters. With age she has mellowed down! So you needn't anymore chant that song of loss! Here I see the joy of a proud father! I also join in your joy! An inspired write

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Valerie Dohren 25 July 2013

Excellent poem Joseph - they usually do return in the fullness of time, one way or another. Mine has gone to London, but says she will come back north - eventually! ! Enjoyed reading.

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R.j. Wynn 25 July 2013

That's great news for you. Carry on Joe

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R.j. Wynn 25 July 2013

That's great news for you. Carry on Joe

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