Daughter's gone, daughter's gone,
Still my memories linger on;
All those moments through the years
Fraught with anguish, doubts and fears.
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Brought on a soft smile and a light chuckle. Oh, I enjoyed this sooo much. Congrats to you, and bravo to daughter.
she is back, she is back and with that life is better and happier she is never gone after all
Mine are leaving as they age, but as with yours hopefully never too far away.
children are always loving to parent. they may be doing several mischief yet always loving. parent always like to see them happy. so your happiness is natural.though i dont have any daughter but i think daughters are more loving to father. regards
As a father of two daughter I surely appreciate this fine poetic work.
I like it Jo. Sometimes we can't wait for them to go, but then we are happy when they return.
There is all the reason for you to rejoice! Your daughter who once fooled you arousing unnecessary anxieties in you has come back once more fooling you by proving that your onetime fears were out of place! Yes, seventeen is a turbulent age for most of the youngsters. With age she has mellowed down! So you needn't anymore chant that song of loss! Here I see the joy of a proud father! I also join in your joy! An inspired write
Excellent poem Joseph - they usually do return in the fullness of time, one way or another. Mine has gone to London, but says she will come back north - eventually! ! Enjoyed reading.
its a very nice poem...as i love my paa a lot... i could feel your feelings...loved it a lot! !