Saturday, October 19, 2019

Daughter Of Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

This water is like time slipping through my fingers.
Things that once were - no more - shall never be again.
Life lives in silence and sound, smiles and tears, lingers
in petals that find themselves drifting in the rain.
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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Mahtab Bangalee 08 February 2020

The morning rises in her shawl of heron blue, floating memoirs across the river in white mist./// beautiful poetic expression; beautiful poem penned, congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 February 2020

Sounds of love and life! ! Musing! Daughter of rain; Showers of blessing. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 08 February 2020

Excellent piece of work on time..congratulations for the poem of the day

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 February 2020

A beauty! ! Such awesomely composed. Great imagery. Shows your awesome talent as a poet. Congrats on being selected as the poem of the day. 'I am fortified on the edge of evergreen. The earth, water, and sky are mingled in my vein. Time will tell the story of a great river queen who dived beneath the sparkle of sweetest refrain and rose on wings of clouds with a daughter of rain.'... is such a wonderful stanza.10++

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Harley White 08 February 2020

A well crafted poem with fresh language and imagery... impressive... very deserving of poem of the day...

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Pasquale DiMeola 08 February 2020

enchanting verses-you have mentally absorbed the language of nature and have translated it for the rest of us in your poetry.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 February 2020

The morning rises in her shawl of heron blue, floating memoirs across the river in white mist. With branches in her hair and roots within her shoe, she is a gypsy muse with flowers on her wrist, skirting softly as lovers' whispers in a tryst., , simply beautiful very poetic. the title itself attracts. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 February 2020

A significant poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece, dear Ma’am Linda........10+++❤️

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Chima Ononogbu 08 February 2020

A really beautiful poem with descriptive coloration. Nice stuff.

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James Mclain 19 October 2019

A tremendous amount of information here Linda, It was beautiful a lovely poem and I thank you.

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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