Saturday, May 9, 2009

Daughter Of Pharaoh Comments

Rating: 5.0

' Oh Shauq!
weak of courage..
Tell me...
How will you tolerate
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Anonymous Butterfly 07 May 2010

I like the third stanza: Her power is youth with a sparkling smile crystal laughter and eyes of deep concern While I was reading this piece I felt that you were talking about the past and the future. I don't know if I got it right but that's what it felt like. A beautiful poem dedicated to your own Cleopatra. I don't know much about her, but I know that she always bathed in milk. Her skin must have been really silky and fair. Have a nice day. B.B.

0 0 Reply
Merna Ibrahim 25 May 2009

yes, Cleopatra was so beautiful...her eyes, her hair, and her smile.....etc.Thanks alot that you wrote a poem for Cleopatra or a poem for Egypt :) thanks...Merna

0 0 Reply
Afzal Shauq

Afzal Shauq

Somewhere in the world of dreams
Close
Error Success