Saturday, April 10, 2010

Daughter Of Nile……1004/10 Comments

Rating: 2.7

Pair of warmest, shiny, amber eyes.
See through deceit and alluring lies.

Fairest damsel in rank and file.
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saadat tahir
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Yasmin Khan 25 April 2013

It's simply beatific, radiant and warm like 'shiny, amber eyes', depicting pure feelings for a pure soul. A beautiful composition thoroughly impressive!

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Meena Mustafa 29 June 2012

Terrific write :) enjoyed reading it.

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Zeenat Fatima 31 December 2011

Wow! Marvellous poem!

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 18 April 2010

What a masterpiece. I just fell in love with the gorgeous poetic rhyme, the well chosen words, provocative images and your strong and visible tone. Well done Ro'ya

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Rehana Nazli 11 April 2010

Ya! aiyoun’el Maha wa ghina ‘el bahar. Aj’ab-nee ghareeb wa ghalafnee bis s’har. Aariftee wa fahamtee qooaat’el saba. Mawjooda fi aayee tareek wa qullo rehaa. Qutulnee ba ayoonukee bedoon’er rehma. Ishh hina qalm, jaamid...heeya ma fehma.! wow, multilingual...change in climate and culture from Islamabad to Saudia is significantly influential and well projected in your poem Saadat. Beautiful narrative.

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