Pair of warmest, shiny, amber eyes.
See through deceit and alluring lies.
Fairest damsel in rank and file.
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What a masterpiece. I just fell in love with the gorgeous poetic rhyme, the well chosen words, provocative images and your strong and visible tone. Well done Ro'ya
Ya! aiyoun’el Maha wa ghina ‘el bahar. Aj’ab-nee ghareeb wa ghalafnee bis s’har. Aariftee wa fahamtee qooaat’el saba. Mawjooda fi aayee tareek wa qullo rehaa. Qutulnee ba ayoonukee bedoon’er rehma. Ishh hina qalm, jaamid...heeya ma fehma.! wow, multilingual...change in climate and culture from Islamabad to Saudia is significantly influential and well projected in your poem Saadat. Beautiful narrative.
It's simply beatific, radiant and warm like 'shiny, amber eyes', depicting pure feelings for a pure soul. A beautiful composition thoroughly impressive!