Saturday, October 24, 2009

Daughter In Low ** Comments

Rating: 4.2

In a pretty package
tired up with a ribbon and a bow
the bride bared gifts
to the new mother in low
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Milica Franchi De Luri
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Alfred Cawe 14 May 2010

Intelligently organized....I love it

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 02 November 2009

excellent poem - cleverly expressed

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Mamta Agarwal 31 October 2009

Milica, this is priceless, very like a parable. in the arrogance of youth children forget time will catch up with them too. how low could the daughter go. the theme of this poem Milica is very topical. you have presented with great mystery, humour and finally faced with great reselience. i just submitted a poem its always too late on the same theme. great style and presentation. Mamta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2009

Mother in low stood there gob smacked She thought she was having a heart attack........... Once she was able to speak, she softly uttered: 'What goes around may one day come around'....Milicaca madame it is really a day for daughter-in-law but soon table will be turned on her..she will go through same phase as is the tradition... very good write and appealingand it is happening in eavrbody's life...10 read mine..old age home.....sun...sun n son

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Alison Cassidy 28 October 2009

This modern day parable is both confronting and amusing. Your final couplet is cleverly expressed and straight to the point. An interesting story, told with relish. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Raj Arumugam 25 October 2009

excellent poem - great humor and yet great truth about life from everyone's perspectives

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Rakesh Bedi 24 October 2009

nice poem, milica...i enjoyed it.....

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