Daughter Comments

Well at least you are not now looking for marks. Sounds and looks like a letter rather than a poem. Read more of the good poems for tips.

Sigue Adelante con tus publicaciones, eres genial.

Live life to the fullest, Love with all your might, Laugh, cry, make mistakes, Get back up, No Regrets! ! a good mother's advice to the daughter...... very fine description of her heart..... tony

Awesome! Very well penned. Keep it up