Friday, September 9, 2005

Daughter Comments

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She left because it was
the thing to do, she said.
We were so many years behind.
To make her own mistakes
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 09 September 2005

Well...........thanks for that visual Herbert! As for the poem, very heartwarming. I pray my kids don't make the same mistakes as I had as a young woman.....all I can do is cross my fingers and pray. Very nice poem. (Of course now the last line is burnt into my mind! !) Thanks, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 09 September 2005

We think we know everything. I know I learned alot from my brother's mistakes when he first left home....but I still made my own as well. Good write!

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