Friday, December 16, 2011

Daughter Comments

Rating: 4.7

Ten lil fingers
Ten lil toes
One bright smile
And a cute lil nose
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Federico del Corazón
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Sandra Feldman 09 August 2016

Escrito con el corazon y el amor de un padre. Bellisimo e inolvidable regalo para su hija y para el lector.

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Souren Mondal 06 December 2015

A very sweet and cute poem.. Loved it :)

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Harry Couchon Jr 19 May 2012

Frederico Hi I loved this poem and I can tell that your daughters mean the world to you. Same with me

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Kaitlin Schmidt 27 December 2011

Your daughters are lucky to have a father like you. A beautiful way to express your love for them.. Great job! !

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Jacqui Broad 19 December 2011

This is the kind of poem every daughter wants her father to write her. In times of trouble, or being in that difficult stage of being a teenager, this would be the kind of words one would want to read. Thanks for sharing!

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Scotty Dogg 19 December 2011

My tastes tend to lean towards something a little more strange. This a lovely poem to your daughter, and I'm sure she'll love it. What I would like to read from you is something darker. What is the oddest/scariest moment in your life? Have you ever felt like hell/death was at your doorstep? Shock me! Make me do a double take. Or make me smile with something funny/outragous. These are my comments. PS also, watch the grammer. Very important to get ideas across: you can't be seen as someone who can't spell. Use spell check or a dictionary. I am a terrible speller. I write using Word, then spell check everything. The poems I've read are really sweet, and mostly directed towards a lover or loved one. This is great, but do something a little more 'edgy.' DOG!

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Sajna Kailas 16 December 2011

wow! ! ! ! ! I just proud to be a daughter! while reading this I remember my pappa, yes the same way he is caring me! It is a great relation between a father and a daughter! loved it! ! God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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