Ten lil fingers
Ten lil toes
One bright smile
And a cute lil nose
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Frederico Hi I loved this poem and I can tell that your daughters mean the world to you. Same with me
Your daughters are lucky to have a father like you. A beautiful way to express your love for them.. Great job! !
This is the kind of poem every daughter wants her father to write her. In times of trouble, or being in that difficult stage of being a teenager, this would be the kind of words one would want to read. Thanks for sharing!
My tastes tend to lean towards something a little more strange. This a lovely poem to your daughter, and I'm sure she'll love it. What I would like to read from you is something darker. What is the oddest/scariest moment in your life? Have you ever felt like hell/death was at your doorstep? Shock me! Make me do a double take. Or make me smile with something funny/outragous. These are my comments. PS also, watch the grammer. Very important to get ideas across: you can't be seen as someone who can't spell. Use spell check or a dictionary. I am a terrible speller. I write using Word, then spell check everything. The poems I've read are really sweet, and mostly directed towards a lover or loved one. This is great, but do something a little more 'edgy.' DOG!
wow! ! ! ! ! I just proud to be a daughter! while reading this I remember my pappa, yes the same way he is caring me! It is a great relation between a father and a daughter! loved it! ! God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Escrito con el corazon y el amor de un padre. Bellisimo e inolvidable regalo para su hija y para el lector.