Part - II
Seventh, the python, lying in its lurch
Content to eat whatever comes across
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hmmmmmmmmmmm...................artistically came from a very juicy mind...................love it............................hmmmmmmmm........i am excited to be reminded about what life really is in the next part...........hopefully sooner..................God..........this is a great reminder for all of us............how we should deal life...................very inspiring and touchy...........thanks.
if I loved part 1, I'll sure love part 2, lovely and brilliant as I wxpect from such a gifted poet like yourself, very well done, you evoked the senses of your readers successfully, a solid 10 my friend, if my opinion counts, ,
These are new to me..........from where this wisdom is extracted? Great. I am waiting for the other parts............
is not actions of sea, python, ant, fish etc natural act. then the wisdom lies in its effective use.nice poem.posted 10 surya
Excellent follow up to the first poem, again, good flow and your wisdom shines through 10 Lynda xx
Richly metaphorical. Much wisdom expressed here. Beautifully written. Praise for your eloquent pen. Warm regards, Sandra
Magnificent opus written.........great metaphors and deep thought provoking piece!
Once again, I must congratulate you to have put this immortal story in English. This is a valiant effort.