First, the earth with mountains & rivers,
Though people dig, tread and set it afire,
It deviates not from the vow of patience,
It feeds & houses them, doesn’t cross fire.
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............i have to read and read again this poem...........because it awakens my soul................and i love this one............
For That to comment this poem, at least it is necessary will remind for myself, enlightenments of Gautama Buda which I very much respect...10x10 Best wishes, Tsira
wow, that is really deep and powerful, lovely poem, loved your tone, your well chosen words and teh way you expressed your ideas, very well done :)
Pridhvi, Aapas, Thejo, Vaayu, Aakasath, , , , , , , , , , , the five elements, how they made this world, , , , , , , , , , , , , , authoritatively dealt with
Wonderful imagery and flow in this captivating piece, 10 Lynda xx
i like the musical flow and the captivating imagery. The morning is aflame with your intense, creative energy. Excellent, C.P. Always your friend, Sandra
yours is like a nice prayer giving praise to the sun, the earth the mountains and fire and all nature a nice way to start my morning lovely dear CP sir -10 anjali
Thank you for this CP.Sometimes in the West we lose touch with our sense of the spiritual.Thank you so much for re-concentrating our thoughts on things other than 'Self. Sid.
Richness have this poem.......informative piece written in a stunning composition.......10+++
a wonderful assembly of sage cognitions penned allegorically in wisdom
a good poem to start the day with...a wise share sir...thank you
I must congratulate you to have put this immortal story in English verse form. We all can respectfully learn this attitude...