Dark brown dry fruit delicacy and delicious
Almond pitted and highly nutricious
Tasty Arabian chocolate hued treat
Eastern 'n' Persian sweetmeat
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sweet poem, i loved this..............................................
seems to be for ramadhaan Is it Iftaar party well done 19
so sweet like the dates...........................and the restrictions of dates in Islam can be a theme for debate indeed yet I feel there is a sweetness in it as well................
nice straight forward lines...stating a religious dictum drawing attention to the holy month of ramadan the word play injects a freshness into the iftar.. :) i remember as a student decades back we used it to similar advantage to tease our class fellows. nice liked
wow! great piece of work simply superb and your style of co-relating dates is a great meaning. Hope holy ramadan is date free not dates free in the plate of rozedaars
First, I thank you for commenting on my poem and giving me feedback, I love how you use the Ramadan theme in your poem and I wish you a Ramadan karim, keep up the good work.
thnks fr the cmment and yor poem is good too actually it is a very good poem about the date.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! : }
MashaALLAH! Sweetness and serenity personified.