Wednesday, November 19, 2014

Date With A Vampire Comments

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There once was a vampire quite fat,
Who was partial to fricassee of rat?
He liked to drink blood, but rat he did favour,
It really was quite peculiar behaviour.
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Damian Cranney
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Colleen Courtney 14 May 2014

Love this dark and humorous write! Well done!

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Anand Brown 14 May 2014

Check the spelling for brake, should be break. BUT other than that, i loved this poem. The blending of two social misfits renders an alternative to the perceived notions. I loved how you rounded each line off with an effective rhyme that actually added meaning and developed the ideas presented in the poem. The poem in itself is quite funny, but it has a stronger more serious message behind that should not be forgotten. Excellent poem :)

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