Date With A Vampire Comments

Love this dark and humorous write! Well done!

Check the spelling for brake, should be break. BUT other than that, i loved this poem. The blending of two social misfits renders an alternative to the perceived notions. I loved how you rounded each line off with an effective rhyme that actually added meaning and developed the ideas presented in the poem. The poem in itself is quite funny, but it has a stronger more serious message behind that should not be forgotten. Excellent poem :)