Thursday, April 23, 2009

Date With A Dime.....Everyday Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Picked me up off a table top
Puny li’l guy with botched up crop

Whistled along to the subway stop
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saadat tahir
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a lovely long poem..i wonder how you wereable to writeit so well...

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M A 02 August 2009

Very colorful. Reminds me of the 'Autobiography of a coin' essays we had to write in school. They used to be my favorite, cause it was full of possibilities.

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Duh Huh 13 June 2009

This is beautiful, i couldnt stop reading nor did i want to :) What imagination, what creativity, it takes all that and a lot of talent to make the 'life' of a dime so entertaining. Thank you for sharing.

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Lady Grace 09 June 2009

of course, another beautiful poem from the author..every two lines differs from other 2 lines, but one thing in common, beautiful in the eyes of the readers..grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Another loving verse, like it.

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