Thursday, December 17, 2009

Date With A Devil Comments

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The night comes around at last.
The stars shine like luminous diamonds.
My heart swells and falls like a sea.
The two feelings urge yet repel me.
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Lauren Kapusta
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David Sabo 20 January 2010

creepy, i thought it was, but who is the strangest one, you or him?

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You Dont Know Me 17 December 2009

first of all, i love the subject, very interesting, especially for me. i like your use of metaphors and similes nicely worded and great imagery its been a pleasure :)

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Lauren Kapusta

Lauren Kapusta

Pittsburgh, PA
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