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when you are caught in a corner and nowhere else to go that's the time to pick your brain and start thinkin'...Well penned, mate..

beautiful words and the last two lines say it all....when one awakens is when one starts to see...and live....

I started to see the day I became blind. I started to live the day I died. What a paradox and what a reality! Both are intermingled in this beautiful poem...10/10. Regards Naseer

great stunning love of warm feelings.. penned through a poet who knows well how to pen her feelings.. hazem al..

''Yes, you are right! I started to see the day I became blind. I started to live the day I died.'' wonderful realistic poem..10

Awesome verses...fine end lines...10+++

Wonderful as always! I totally agree with teh 2 comments below...last stanza is brilliant!

An excellent poem it is. The last three lines are wonderful. I love the idea/message of this poem.

I started to see the day I became blind. I started to live the day I died. Awesome poetry and profound thought. CP