Monday, June 8, 2009

Date Myself Comments

Rating: 5.0

2nite at dinner, i was being rude...making fun of the food...
i was being sarcastic and nasty
iwas talking over people, mimicking them, being sassy
and once we got home, you got the courage to confront me...
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

very long pem, but the answer it self can be very long also..would one date themselves

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Krista'lyntinia Lancelaotti 27 November 2009

THAT IS SUCH A GOOD? ..WOULD I DATE MYSELF..PROBALY NOT

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Teresa Babson 29 September 2009

would we truly ever date ourselves

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Eyan Desir 17 June 2009

Hello you need to be treated better than ok you made some mistake...check over this was well written...but u repeated your self to much....this could of been a little shoter I got a little confuse...with the he and she back and forth but......you got a talent to make words flow.....you will hit sucess in the card business....good luck.... 10s.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 June 2009

I got to listen to Andy Williams song 'love story' when reading this. Wow....what a great and noble writes!

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oh that was long sad filled by motions and emotions..but very well said..you were controlling the way of this story telling by the beautiful rhymes very well expressed ..i just felt that feeling for both deeply...a touching story putt in a touching way...that moment of leaving..moments of separation always ache my heart...10+++++

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