Thursday, September 26, 2013

Darling, I Love You Comments

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I know, you wrote my name on sand
Wind that bowed and serge that kissed
Lovers walked over it hand in hand
Thought, It‘ll be washed out, it missed
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Heather Wilkins 10 October 2013

beautiful poem. well written

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Ruby Mostazir 29 September 2013

wow!

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Sallam Yassin 28 September 2013

the love is always unsure the love is fair /unfair the love is firm/ infirm but like/ love is always there

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Pardaz Sheikh 27 September 2013

I know, you wrote my name on sand Wind that bowed and serge that kissed Lovers walked over it hand in hand Thought, It‘ll washed out, you missed well written lines

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Neela Nath Das 26 September 2013

Very soothing poem.Loved the confessional style.In a word- - - superb!

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