Tuesday, January 12, 2010

# Darling...Don'T Keep Me Waiting Comments

Rating: 3.5

will wait for you
till on your own
you come to me
will not compel you
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Ken E Hall 18 July 2010

Love is sure worth waiting for and if she reads this poem she will be back in a flash...nice one Sam ++++10

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Pandian Angelina 27 May 2010

She waits to be held in your rms And sway to a waltz As always you lead on But it she who waits For a beloved as yearning as you. True hearts never speak But only always in poetry!

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Raymond Rivera 24 February 2010

This is the first poem I read from you that is moderatley simple. Not saying it's a bad thing. After the first couple of lines I mistook you for talking of a child who's learning to walk, thought, 'uhp, i know where this is going.' The surprise at the end was fantastic and I couldn't have said it better if I tried. This is a great poem.

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C. P. Sharma 25 January 2010

Sam, initially I mistook it but you are on the right lines. You say it so beautifully and truly. CP

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Louis Rams 18 January 2010

a poets nightmare is when the words no longer come freely, and the memories of the past lingers on your lips. BEAUTIFUL

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Mamta Agarwal 17 January 2010

yes Samanyan, we can't write poetry unless we are inspired, well sketched. there is an element of suspense, and the ending a surprise brings a smile and a nod... Mamta

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Anjali Sinha 17 January 2010

wowwwww this is awesome! ! ! ! -10 anjali

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Riyaz Gupta 17 January 2010

So nicely written! So submissive to love!

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Ency Bearis 17 January 2010

unique and interesting....nice poem....10

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Lynda Robson 15 January 2010

A compelling read, hope she doesn't keep you waiting too long, Well versed 10 Lynda xx

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Antonio Liao 14 January 2010

it’s a tears of a dreaming hope......makes me happy, a laughter that my whole self wouldn't forget.....say it I can wait you dear....God bless

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 January 2010

The desire is great, tells many chapter of your profound love Matchaa!

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Incredably inductive. Wow! You can't rush it lest you build a hut. You are in the business of building palaces my friend and that takes time. I like the personification. Well done! 10/10

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 January 2010

very nicely written... sweet and amusing... waiting until the muse came...but with the urgency and heartfelt plea... the words chosen add suspense to it this is a very interesting write...impressive 10++++ Maia

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Kesav Easwaran 13 January 2010

good humour with a sense of purpose...and with a sense of urgency too...10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 January 2010

The darling is a closed pen. It is a surprise and a suspense till the end.

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Ravi Sathasivam 12 January 2010

Quite interesting poem. Well penned. I suppose, she can keep you waiting...? ? Well done Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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Nikunj Sharma 12 January 2010

she cant and aint waiting...your poetic pen is creating marvels by the millisecond...this poem is again a sweet, simple and stimulating one like a freindly handshake...pls read my poem AU REVOIR if you have time

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Romeo Della Valle 12 January 2010

It won't be easy, but it can come true, hope is the only thing that keeps us going...If she does not comes back, she becomes our muse or only source of inspiration, like the one I had and still I miss dearly, I wonder why...that is life...well penned poem, keep it up...10+++, Love and Peace, Romeo (Sorry, I have been having problems with this site when coming to rating...anyway, I rated 10+++)

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 12 January 2010

Yeah, the Muse has to come to you........bt she can keep u waiting.....

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