will wait for you
till on your own
you come to me
will not compel you
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She waits to be held in your rms And sway to a waltz As always you lead on But it she who waits For a beloved as yearning as you. True hearts never speak But only always in poetry!
This is the first poem I read from you that is moderatley simple. Not saying it's a bad thing. After the first couple of lines I mistook you for talking of a child who's learning to walk, thought, 'uhp, i know where this is going.' The surprise at the end was fantastic and I couldn't have said it better if I tried. This is a great poem.
Sam, initially I mistook it but you are on the right lines. You say it so beautifully and truly. CP
a poets nightmare is when the words no longer come freely, and the memories of the past lingers on your lips. BEAUTIFUL
yes Samanyan, we can't write poetry unless we are inspired, well sketched. there is an element of suspense, and the ending a surprise brings a smile and a nod... Mamta
A compelling read, hope she doesn't keep you waiting too long, Well versed 10 Lynda xx
it’s a tears of a dreaming hope......makes me happy, a laughter that my whole self wouldn't forget.....say it I can wait you dear....God bless
The desire is great, tells many chapter of your profound love Matchaa!
Incredably inductive. Wow! You can't rush it lest you build a hut. You are in the business of building palaces my friend and that takes time. I like the personification. Well done! 10/10
very nicely written... sweet and amusing... waiting until the muse came...but with the urgency and heartfelt plea... the words chosen add suspense to it this is a very interesting write...impressive 10++++ Maia
good humour with a sense of purpose...and with a sense of urgency too...10
The darling is a closed pen. It is a surprise and a suspense till the end.
Quite interesting poem. Well penned. I suppose, she can keep you waiting...? ? Well done Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
she cant and aint waiting...your poetic pen is creating marvels by the millisecond...this poem is again a sweet, simple and stimulating one like a freindly handshake...pls read my poem AU REVOIR if you have time
It won't be easy, but it can come true, hope is the only thing that keeps us going...If she does not comes back, she becomes our muse or only source of inspiration, like the one I had and still I miss dearly, I wonder why...that is life...well penned poem, keep it up...10+++, Love and Peace, Romeo (Sorry, I have been having problems with this site when coming to rating...anyway, I rated 10+++)
Yeah, the Muse has to come to you........bt she can keep u waiting.....
Love is sure worth waiting for and if she reads this poem she will be back in a flash...nice one Sam ++++10