If you wish to kill me,
you should do it softly.
And then proceed to love me
like silk, like rough hay.
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This is a great poem. It struck a nerve with me, and a new poem, 'Still not knowing quite what to think of you', simply popped into my mind. Good write. Your poem flows so well. It has fluency of thought and form, and sounds lovely when I read it out loud.
I agree with William, i too tried to say it aloud, and its wonderful.One we can all relate to. Preets