Thursday, April 24, 2008

Darkness Within Death Comments

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In the day i put on a smile
at night i fear for my life

Though my smile covers my fear it does not hide it from the sun
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Stacy Bea
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Subbaraman N V 28 April 2008

Yes, I am able to see that darkness within death! Pl. see my poem 'Deathless Tribe' in the PH.

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Abha Sharma 24 April 2008

all knowledge is gained with great pain...your pain in the poem ends up in a positive note...well composed.

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