Darkness (Senryu) Comments

A TOUCHING TRIBUTE TO THE QUAKE VICTIMS! 10! -Raj

of course, they too mourn....everyone...everything mourns! !

nature too mourns... Mamta

The things of darkness always more unpalatable than those of the light. I like how even the stars must run away, at the hideous sights and sounds.

Your powerful words could equally apply to the darkness (like night) described by those who suffered death and homelessness in last February's wild fires in Victoria. It would seem that nature's wrath can be felt in a myriad of guises all over the planet. Excellent poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Nature sharing in the sorrow of human beings...Lovely expressions.

This senryu is a sad tribute to earthquake victims. It reminded me the earthquake of Oct.8,2005.

Your words are so true for so many people today. Wonderful read

A true senryu, true to its purpose. Wonderful and touching.

everything is said in these three lines..you can express a strong emotion in few words like no one else. thanks for sharing, Sandra. Yelena M.

a commendable three liner, sandra; full of pain, emotions for the sufferers, dear....count me with you, plz....thanks for sharing...

a sad one friend....why give an earthquake and feel sad for it too...we would never understand the ways of nature

darkness spreads gloom the earth tilts putting lives topsy turvy good poem few lines but loaded with good meaning

mother earth is the worst sufferer...i too mourn for her!

Oh such a sad senryu my friend this reminds me of the people of Indonesia....10/10