Sunday, November 22, 2009

Darkness Of Our Race Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness wraps around me
Binding my very soul
Yet I still remember innocence
That I shall never again know
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Okami Kamikaze
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Ying Escalona 22 November 2009

wow, its like a real Kamikaze... heading for the battle ship, in few seconds, its spectacular....but there is a great sorrow, because within the thick back and red smoke, in an innocent life...Okami-san, e desu ne

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Patti Masterman 22 November 2009

Wow, this really captured my imagination. These two lines made my heart ache: 'Yet I still remember innocence That I shall never again know' There's so much talent in here; how the words can create the same mood in the reader.

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