Monday, January 16, 2012

Darkness Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tell me why I am waiting,
For something to wish upon,
Something to give me hope.
Beacause all I have been given,
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Fluorescent Reality
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Fluorescent Reality 17 January 2012

i don't need the same style throughout, that's part of the social context behind me, my mind isn't in one place it's all over the place. i can't think straight and i have no direction to go in... it's confusing for you but it's part of my style. live with it :)

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Aylin Lp 16 January 2012

that's very good, it's just that you've got 4 different bits (fantastic bits) but it's like they all belong to different poems so you need to keep the same style throughout the whole poem and i'm sure it'll work out: P

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Rajendran Muthiah 16 January 2012

Tears bubble up in my eyes! The sweetest song is the saddest song.Tell me why, please just tell me why? You are alone inspired to write such lines. A mellifluous song like Tamil film songs. Cheers!

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