Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, February 27, 2014

Darkness May Not Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was standing alone
Under the tree and feeling lonely
There might be some personal reason
Yet she was all alone in person
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 March 2014

The poem represents the pain women undergo in the society. Stagnating as it is. Women need an outlet. A topical poem.Nicely done. meenas17, Malaysia Mar 01,2014 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Very positive thinking 28 Feb by Ginger Blue to Darkness may not

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Like 28 Feb by Ginger Blue to Darkness may not

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Like 4 minutes ago by Ginger Blue | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Ginger Blue Very positive thinking 3 minutes ago by Ginger Blue | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Nice Joshua Collins7 hours ago I really like this one! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Comment +1 . E.J Marshall7 hours ago pretty solid, man Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Isolation Juan Rivera7 hours ago Something in this poem was left out? how the poet knows a woman's heart? Not so, very rarely does this actually happen... Comment 1 Comment+1 Juan Rivera7 hours ago Maybe she just did not feel good, we all have crosses to bear so to speak, what lies beneath can never be known by a simple observation... Perhaps a death? Let's hope not worse... Went from she to they? I just got lost...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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