Friday, July 15, 2011

Darkness & Light Comments

Rating: 2.7

Life,
The immortal fight between darkness and light,
Where the good are victims and the bad are right,
Wondering if there is a cure for this blight,
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fahad alabry
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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2011

nice job fahd beautiful and superb idea...it is in fact the ultimate truth.... keep writing :) sat

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Fahad Alabry 15 July 2011

Hans VR, I'm really glad that you like it , I'm honestly a beginner and I thought of giving it a try in this website, yet I may learn and improve from other's. I appreciate your comment :)

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Hans Vr 15 July 2011

Fahad, This is a fantastic poem Great truth inside with a wonderful message of hope at the end. A 10+ Rhyming very good Keep on posting poems on this website.

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