Thursday, February 20, 2014

Darkness Lessens Comments

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Slowly winter's darkness lessens,
Solstice gloom abates;
As it does our spirit freshens,
Attains enlivened states.
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Stephen Wylie
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Briony Nicholls 13 August 2015

This is just lovely. I can just feel the snow melting as I read these beautifully written words.

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Bursting with a beauty that is both rich and refreshing

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Roseann Shawiak 20 February 2014

Lovely lilting poem, easy flowing rhythm within it's poetical essence. Really great how you slide from winter to spring, lessening the darkness as you bloom in our minds. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem: Progress Is Not Reality. Glad you liked it, especially the trees. RoseAnn

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