Monday, January 12, 2009

Darkness In Bright Sunlight Comments

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As I face this terrible certainty..

The dawn of the darkness greets me warm..
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Shagun Khera
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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

I found this splendid writing and creative and very inspiring. Thanks for infusing the day with a little darkness in bright sunshine! (and I will try very hard not to steal your very catchy title, lol)

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Yelena M. 28 April 2009

Those who walked in darkness have seen a great light, in your poem it is vice versa and it provokes thoughts and renovates feelings.Made me think also of 'Flowers of evil' cycle by Baudelaire.Very powerful and original, thanks for sharing. Best wishes. A.

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Eddie Roa 02 February 2009

Sometimes seeing clearly in the brightness of the noonday sun is more bane than boon. In the clear light of day we see everythign clearly. Since these days the negative aspects of life prevail over the good, we don't like what we see. Clarity, transparency is two edged sword.

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