Darkness In Bloom Comments

You have skilfully expressed a manifest emotion amongst teenagers. I found the clichéd symbolisms representing your sadness befitting of the speaker as a person deprived of ‘love’s need’ may choose to withdraw from the positive attributes, or the creativity, of him or herself. This feeling transgresses to where you give in to ‘misery, ’ giving the poem a subtle time scale. These notions are drawn together by the underlying theme of ‘darkness in bloom’, a clear juxtaposition of nature, to express your isolation from a ‘normal’ state which the reader cannot question through the regimental pace of the poem. Carry on writing!

i like how u expressed ur feeling in this poem... there is so much pain involved here... i am sorry...

There is so much pain in the poem, I love it. Good job =p