Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Darkness Falls Upon Me Comments

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Loneliness—Heartache—Despair—all words that flow into the darkness of my thoughts!
Questions—left unanswered—as though my joy turned to pain!
Still Riddled by the suddenness of my situation—trying to solve this puzzle,
My thoughts twist and turn as if trying to solve the Rubik's Cube—to no avail!
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Dougie Fresh
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Darkangel Flyfree 14 November 2012

Very good poem here! I know exactly how you feel, so lonely, heartache that won't go away, so many thoughts thinking of the one person that meant so much! Really enjoyed this piece as if feeling my pain! Hope you reach that light once more! ! ! Maybe you should reach out to the one you lost!

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