Darkness Falls Comments

Life sometimes can bring in the darkness of the world, but the sun will shine again Profound poem.

We welcome you on this Forum, Corey. Your first poem gives an insight into your world. Poetry is indeed a remedy from boredom but it is much more than that- an experience, an expression and a spiritual bond with the world around. I see in your poem a commendable maturity of thought and a concern for others. I would like to quote a few lines from your poem: Why was I born / into world that corrupt / Molesters Rapists Pedophiles /...In city of black / Where we shall rise all together.