Thursday, March 5, 2009

Darkness Falls Comments

Rating: 5.0

I must return to my evil intent
I must re-spark that dark fire
I must destroy all that is content
And bring back the dark desire
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Tyrone Wingfield
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Darkness J 18 September 2009

Well written poem! When love's gone and that innate sparkle vanish, darkness falls around. Such a nice work!

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Saane Pahulu 18 August 2009

wow that was brilliant... so dark, pure and beautiful. your poem really drew me in! ! ! loved it and that was so a 10+++++

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it is destiend for you to stay true to your darkness..... the world cant be beautiful for everyone.... (or at least I hope not) jk... maybe. nice write

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