Monday, August 18, 2008

Darkness Falls Comments

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Darkness falls like compressed cotton
No, not falls, but darkness tightens
Constricting thought, head, and heart
Not even breath from body depart.
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Tami Gee
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Barbara Terry 18 August 2008

When darkness falls on me, I just sit there wondering if it will ever be light again. I have lived in darkness most of my life, blaming everyone for what my mother did. I tried to find my way, but I kept hitting those dreaded dead ends that plague us through life. This is a well written piece, and tells it like it is. Thank you sharing. Hugs, Barbara

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 18 August 2008

lovely! could you read my poems too? thank you,

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