Sunday, February 19, 2012

Darkness Dream Comments

Rating: 3.5

i dreamed...
i was lost in the night,
making my way through the trees.
small branches lashed against my face,
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Eric Cockrell
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Vipins Puthooran 19 February 2012

It's new a dawn of poetry..... It's a good theme! ! ! ! really a fine work! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 19 February 2012

It's new a dawn of poetry..... It's a good theme! ! ! ! really a fine work! ! !

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Dave Walker 19 February 2012

A great poem, very very haunting, a great write.

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Patti Masterman 19 February 2012

If this was a real dream, it must have been chilling. I've heard there are blind creatures that live deep beneath the oceans. But humans were made to see and learn from everything around them. Great job.

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