Monday, July 23, 2007

Darkness At Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dawn came
With a promise of great happiness
But you,
with your dragon breath,
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leonard daranjo
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Alison Cassidy 25 July 2007

Strong dramatic penning Leonard. You manage to say much in such a few lines - now that's poetic! 'Dragon breath' works brilliantly, too. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 23 July 2007

Excellent imagery which, to me, is what poetry is all about. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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