Sunday, April 22, 2018

Darkness And Light Comments

Rating: 4.7

I was afraid of darkness
I prayed to light to save me.
Light told it never had seen it.
I promised light to take him
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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath
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Akhtar Jawad 09 June 2018

Darkness is nothing but lack of light. A great thought in a well penned poem.

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Thank you Akhtar Jawad for the kind words.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 June 2018

Poem with a beautiful message, darkness vanishes where knowledge of light reigns. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Britte Ninad 20 May 2018

so true- Darkness was there in every corner of mind. ............ I could not see darkness. great words 10++++

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Thank you Britte Ninad for the kind words.

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Thank you Britte.

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Gopalakrishnan 12 May 2018

Great poem. Darkness can be avoided by light only,

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Thank you Gopalakrishnan for the kin words.

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Chinedu Dike 07 May 2018

An inspiring rendition written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Narayanan.

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Thank you for kind words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 May 2018

Darkness was there in every corner of mind. However whenever light was with me, I could not see darkness........touching expression with nice theme. Light is positive attitude where as darkness is negative. A beautiful philosophical poem shared astutely.10

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Thank you for your kind words.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 01 May 2018

Good write indeed.. Thank you.

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Thank you for your time and good words.

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Bharati Nayak 01 May 2018

Fear arises in dark corner of mind.When we stay positive and hopeful, we see the light. A beautiful write, thanks for sharing.Let me quote a few lines- - - - Darkness was there in every corner of mind. However whenever light was with me, I could not see darkness. I decided to stay with light.

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Thank you for your words of appreciation and your time.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 April 2018

Hello Narayanan, I am happy to read your poems. An analysis of light and darkness through this poem is most effectively utilised as a personal dialogue between the two. When the mind is weak darkness dominates but light is so powerful that it covers every dark corner with its brilliance. A full score of 10

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Thank you for your kind words and appreciation of my thoughts.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2018

Darkness was there/in every corner of mind/However whenever light/was with me, I could not see darkness....I appreciate the lucidity of expression in this pragmatic write! You decisive last line is the epitome of your poem! Loved reading it dear poet! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10

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Thank you Dr.

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Robert Murray Smith 22 April 2018

An imaginative write of insight. Glad you recognised the mind few do.

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Thank you for your kind words and time for reading this poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 April 2018

Dear Narayanan, such an inspiring and uplifting poem...10+++

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Thank you Bernard for the kind words.

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

Trissur, Kerala, India.
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