I was afraid of darkness
I prayed to light to save me.
Light told it never had seen it.
I promised light to take him
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Poem with a beautiful message, darkness vanishes where knowledge of light reigns. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
so true- Darkness was there in every corner of mind. ............ I could not see darkness. great words 10++++
An inspiring rendition written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Narayanan.
Darkness was there in every corner of mind. However whenever light was with me, I could not see darkness........touching expression with nice theme. Light is positive attitude where as darkness is negative. A beautiful philosophical poem shared astutely.10
Fear arises in dark corner of mind.When we stay positive and hopeful, we see the light. A beautiful write, thanks for sharing.Let me quote a few lines- - - - Darkness was there in every corner of mind. However whenever light was with me, I could not see darkness. I decided to stay with light.
Hello Narayanan, I am happy to read your poems. An analysis of light and darkness through this poem is most effectively utilised as a personal dialogue between the two. When the mind is weak darkness dominates but light is so powerful that it covers every dark corner with its brilliance. A full score of 10
Thank you for your kind words and appreciation of my thoughts.
Darkness was there/in every corner of mind/However whenever light/was with me, I could not see darkness....I appreciate the lucidity of expression in this pragmatic write! You decisive last line is the epitome of your poem! Loved reading it dear poet! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10
An imaginative write of insight. Glad you recognised the mind few do.
Thank you for your kind words and time for reading this poem.
Dear Narayanan, such an inspiring and uplifting poem...10+++
Darkness is nothing but lack of light. A great thought in a well penned poem.
Thank you Akhtar Jawad for the kind words.