I just realised my poems oft’
Sweetness and light
So here is one for
Those keen on the night
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This is dark as the title states....You've written it well enough to remind me of well, things that go bump in the dark. I guess you can write well on almost anything.....Still to me it describes, more then death, actual nightmares that one gets...scary, scary things. wish I'd found this earlier on before it was DARK outside.This one is likely not to be forgoTEN. marci.m. :)
Love it David. Great to try a different direction once in a while. Try my (blatant self-promotion alert!) ' Don't Bring Me Lines of Daffodils and Clouds.' Complete whimsy and not as sharp and tidy as your work.