Thursday, January 25, 2007

Darkness About My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep within my soul
A darkness is about my heart
The simple pleasures are no longer
No suns rays reach me now
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Alison Smith
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Steve Fulk 04 September 2007

I enjoyed this write Alison. I hope someday I can write as honest as this without masking true reflections. It is tough at times indeed and doesn't matter who this one was written for...it is tough to pen such words...Good write...Steve

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David Harris 07 February 2007

Alison, I agree wholeheartedly with Jim. It is a very wonderful poem and it got a ten vote from me as well. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Jim Foulk 31 January 2007

nice one alison, i gave this a ten. it is a very wonderful put together poem.

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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