Wednesday, July 11, 2007

Darkness Comments

Rating: 2.8

Shattered, broken, the night drawing out
In bits scattered, darkness crawling in
A cloud of smoke
Another night
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Dee Daffodil 12 July 2007

This one almost sounds like you've lost hope...and I'm hoping that is not the case! (don't know you from Adam...just hate to see people suffer!) Remember that often, that trap which we feel ourselves caught in...is actually self imposed... the mind can do wonders, when we free it from chains... Hugs, Dee

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Original Unknown Girl 12 July 2007

Succinct yet effective! Great work... HG: -) xx

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