Monday, June 18, 2007

Darkness Comments

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I'm swimming all alone in a pool of darkness
and I feel like darkness is slowly pulling me under
I yell for help but no one is there to hear it
I begin to see the water at eye level
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Leah Wells
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Marvin Brato 19 June 2007

Sad poem but its impact is real Leah. I believe many can relate to it. Anyway, darkness could swallow our desire to live if we do not dare to ask somebody to help us. We cannot stand alone against the turbulence in life. Reach out to others and you will discover that many are willing to grab your hand and pull you out of darkness my friend. Thanks for sharing this wonderful and meaningful poetry. worth 10.

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Leah Wells

Leah Wells

Edmonton, AB
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