Dark midnight clouds cover the light
In the distance the way seems so black
Motionless but yet continuing
The spring of time has fallen
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You show that even darkness and despair have beauty hidden there!
Impressive.. you really have selected precisely the right words to create the negative atmosphere. 'Enjoyed' is not the word. Admired, perhaps. t x
So very sad, yet so very touching and beautiful....we all have those dark moments where Hope is hard to find to grasp on to.....you have described how the heart and soul feel at that moment perfectly...thank you for this. mm.
Something of a 'Dark Night of the Soul' here Patricia! Often that's where we have to begin...! Paul.