Saturday, March 31, 2007

Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.6

Dark midnight clouds cover the light
In the distance the way seems so black
Motionless but yet continuing
The spring of time has fallen
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Patricia Gale
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Paul Butters 12 May 2007

Something of a 'Dark Night of the Soul' here Patricia! Often that's where we have to begin...! Paul.

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David Taylor 19 April 2007

You show that even darkness and despair have beauty hidden there!

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Terrance Woolridge 06 April 2007

Good one

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Impressive.. you really have selected precisely the right words to create the negative atmosphere. 'Enjoyed' is not the word. Admired, perhaps. t x

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Marci Made 31 March 2007

So very sad, yet so very touching and beautiful....we all have those dark moments where Hope is hard to find to grasp on to.....you have described how the heart and soul feel at that moment perfectly...thank you for this. mm.

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